Please can I have some feedback on my invites?

I'm losing my mind trying to DIY these invites. I just posted this in another sub and whilst I've had some helpful feedback, it's been dominated by cultural differences. So I thought this was best placed here where we understand weddings go on til midnight and dinner is 3 courses!

Also not sure what to put for start time. At 1.45pm, the wedding planner will be taking the guests upstairs to the ceremony room and anyone arriving after that will sadly have to stay in the bar as I'll be outside the ceremony room preparing and doing my thingy with the registrar.

Please can I have your feedback on these invites? Thank you very muchly!